TLC by Chrouya
Script: PhotoKano 03 [mdai][QC -odin][Needs TS][Needs TLC]
Workraw: PhotoKano 03 (720p)

{Sorry, I noticed a typo in the kanji of the song, my fault}
{\be1}{\fad(250,0)\kf16}{\kf53}近{\kf49}く{\kf52}遠{\kf34}い{\kf204}{\kf24}日{\kf28}憎{\kf21}ら{\kf13}し{\kf13}く{\kf38}愛{\kf34}し{\kf16}い
->
{\be1}{\fad(250,0)\kf16}{\kf53}近{\kf49}く{\kf52}遠{\kf34}い{\kf204}{\kf52}憎{\kf21}ら{\kf13}し{\kf13}く{\kf38}愛{\kf34}し{\kf16}い

86
We kissed, but there were no emotions...{It was a kiss, wasn't it? It didn't have much feeling in it, though.}
We kissed, but there was nothing to it.{It was a kiss, wasn't it? It didn't have much feeling in it, though.}
{just an alternative}

97
Damn, where is everyone?{is there nobody here?!}
Damn, where is everyone?!{is there nobody here?!}
{keep the interrobang in}

113
You Idiot!
You idiot!

115
Don't worry about it.
Don't worry, it's fine.
{these are two sentences}

120
She's Yunoki Hinata, a Miss Photogenic candidate.
So she's Yunoki Rina, one of the Miss Photogenic candidates...
{he didn't know her yet}

122
Well, Maeda asked us to help him find his lens cover, and we ended up here.
Well, Maeda asked us to help him find his lens cover, so we tagged along.
{perhaps liberal is better, but Maeda already mentioned he forgot something}

135
What, you touched Ninapai?{he's so slow}
What, you touched Rinapai?{he's so slow}
{rinapai = rina no oppai = Rina's boobs}

139
{\pos(640,707)}You just wanted to touch them yourself!
{\pos(640,707)}Leaving us out on such a happening!
{just a suggestion. The reason I put this here is because literally they say: "Only you get to experience something so nice (and not us)"}

156
Thanks, that makes my day..{I'm glad. Thank you!}{I dono, might be too strong...}
Thanks, I really appreciate it.
{a suggestion that might sound less strong}

190
Maeda, we can do a lot better than this.
Maede, this is all we can do for you.
{as in, they can give him supplies but they are not permitted to go to that club}

207
What were you thinking, coming to a pool where a girl is swimming?{My head isn't thinking of anything better}
What were you thinking, coming to the pool when it's the girls' turn?
{The context is in that the previous period, the girls were having swimming class}
{explains why he states it's lunch break}

208
It's been a while since the lunch break started.{tlc please, not sure about this one}{I'm not 100% sure either, feels like "Lunch has just started, and you're already getting out." to me}
It's been a while since the lunch break started.{tlc please, not sure about this one}{I'm not 100% sure either, feels like "Lunch has just started, and you're already getting out." to me}
Lunch break already started quite a while ago.
{see the context now?}

219
I would've liked to photograph you diving.
I would've liked to photograph you as diver.
{he could've ..you know, just make a photograph right in the other context}

220
No point in photographing me, I'm not even...
No point in photographing someone like me...
{don't feel like the split is necessary}

222
Your diving looks amazing, Senpai!
Your diving looked amazing, Senpai!
{past tense}

235
I don't really want to use this card, but...
I don't really want to use this trump card, but...
{I don't know, but I feel like trump is the essence of that idiom}

TIMING ERROR
291 + 292
She said she quit diving because she's busy being the student council president.
293
That is part of the reason. {sore ha riyuu no ittan ni sugin}
She wouldn't give up on diving so easily since she'd been doing it since her childhood.

-->
She said she quit diving because she's busy being the student council president.
That's only part of the reason.
You wouldn't give up on diving that easily if you've been doing it since childhood.
{this is my TLC on these lines}

302
Haruka, Let's go help the soccer club!
Haruka, let's go cheer for the soccer club!
{caps and definition mistake here}

303
Kiriyama-kun's efforts are being overlooked.
We'll miss out on Kiriyama-kun's actions!
{fangirls ><}

338
Wow! She has...
Wow! This girl is...
{The boobs make him remind who she is}

340
Everything above it collapsed.
Everything above it is about to fall.
{it's not past tense}

376
Damn, so suddenly...
Damn, the time has come.
{tsui ni = at last}

424
They'll be useful as references to check your form..{jake, she apparently wants to use the photos to see if she's doing the motions correctly, I can't come up with a good line -alta}
I hope they'll be useful as references to check your form.
{"ba ii" wasn't included in translation}

TIMING ISSUE
449
You're really worthy of praise!
That working range is really worthy of praise!
{その守備範囲 賞賛に値するぞ = sono shubi han'i shousan ni ataisuru zo == some of it is in line 448}
{The translation of first part was overlooked and put in the line before without TL}